C20 · Complete teaching source

Complete original folio pair. First words: “The card has a thing in the middle.” Chosen revision: “The round badge has a square hole in the middle.” Source: the C01 invented badge record. Writer note: “I chose these words to help someone find that drawing.” No independent reader test is recorded.

Child invitation

Show one useful change, or keep a part and explain your choice.

Staff possible reasoning

Round badge and square hole make the description specific to the record and the named finding job.

Next teaching

Try a new object record in a familiar interest and keep separate first words, feedback and the next version.

Limit

A revision can show a text-making choice; it does not automatically show independent decoding, spelling, handwriting or successful use.