# D-first · Make a small camera-card guide · Own paper mode

Static paper mode. All four optional answers start empty. Choose one, several or free paper; usual communication and exact adult scribing work. This file has no editable temporary-state promise or staff models.

## Whole neutral source

Complete original supplied record: An invented camera drawing has a square body, one circular front window and two small top marks. The marks have no names. No photograph was taken. First guide paragraph: “This drawing have a front window. It shows a round window on a square body.” Second paragraph: “Find the round part in front.” A writer changes the first sentence to “This drawing has a front window.” Writer note: “I changed the subject–verb match.” No reader has tried either version. The intended reader wants a clue to the front window in the drawing, not instructions for using a real camera.

## Make one small useful guide part for the front-window finding job.



## Choose one edit or keep decision and explain it using the record.



## Explain what changed between the two first sentences and what a reader result would still require.



## Plan a short private explanation of your guide. Choose one useful question a reader could ask.