A tiny guide rescue

Day 39 · A tiny guide rescue

Complete source

Complete original creature-card draft: “This kit have two paper feet. The feet sits on two dots. Find the red mark to start.” The supplied kit record says it has two paper feet, two standing dots and a start mark identified by a triangle, with no colour specified.

Invitation

Choose one grammar or source-detail repair and keep first/revised words with its reason.

Full sequence

Read draft and full kit record; choose one useful mismatch; compose a correction; keep the other parts available for later if wanted.

Adult possible reasoning · keep separate from own words

This kit has two paper feet fixes a subject–verb match; The feet sit on two dots is another valid edit. A triangular start mark corrects the unsupported colour description.

Access and limits

An adult can write exact words; independent spelling is recorded only where attempted. Choose a small part; no time/box/word quota, purchase, printer or returned work.

The child may choose one edit, keep a separate part with a reason, or ask about the missing colour.

Notice

A chosen edit has a supported reason without requiring all repairs.