Tell what the answer actually says · a small project

Read the complete source: C03 · Answer and new suggestion · C04 · A repair handover

Tell what the answer actually says · a small project

Small job

Create a repair handover envelope containing the response and a clear message, so another person can understand the pretend costume job without asking for the story again.

Make and try

1. Read or hear both complete matched sources. Choose one of their readers, character views or practical jobs.

2. Create a repair handover envelope containing the response and a clear message, so another person can understand the pretend costume job without asking for the story again.

3. Make a small first version using the day's child direction: ‘Read the answer. Tell it clearly. Put your new idea in a different sentence.’

4. Try it with a willing reader, or use the supplied reader question/answer. Record which was used. Nobody has to interview or perform publicly.

5. Choose one useful change or explain one part you keep. Put the source note and any adult help beside the work.

Another option

Use the other complete matched source for a second version after introducing it; compare reader fit rather than page count.

Time

20–40 minutes across sittings, unpiloted; ordinary teaching and feedback, not a scored assignment.

What this can show

Look for an accurate choice and supplied reason, and a signalled new suggestion. Do not require the adult’s model wording or invent a factual property for the item.