Keep or change for a reader

C20 · Keep or change for a reader

Complete fictional source

An original fictional story parcel contains a pebble-character arrival story and a blue-star report card. A reader looking for a funny event is offered the pebble story; a reader needing a decoration preference is offered the report card. The story’s draft ending says, ‘Then it was good.’ A supplied reader question asks, ‘What did the pebble notice at the landing?’ The maker may replace the vague ending with a specific fictional noticing. They may keep ‘plop-plop’ because it supports the playful mood. The report remains a report of Jo’s supplied preference, not a new story fact. The parcel can stay private; no real publishing account is needed.

Your invitation

Use the complete source for the day's named job. Choose spoken, pointed, dictated, object or written work; keep the source and any new suggestion distinguishable.

Source status

Original complete fictional ordinary teaching source; adult-read option, not unseen held assessment.