Eli’s winter-window wish · full staff component guide
Complete original fiction; no real participant, measurement, approval, local service or learner result
Whole source
In a made-up window-design story, Eli says, “I want the blue panel near the title.” Mo says, “I think the amber panel might be easier for me to notice.” These are different people’s wish and tentative judgement. No noticeability check happened and no choice was declared best. The story gives no universal audience preference or measured result.
Eligibility and actual help
Use after actual first-source feedback and new unrelated voice/reporting teaching, with comparable eligible component opportunity. Keep first originals, exposure and actual support/interval; no automatic later score.
Keep actual source exposure, prompt, mode/help, exact own words, interval and intervening teaching. Models are teaching examples, not pupil results or official bands. Select taught eligible components; keep own first words before criteria/models.
B-later-1
Exact prompt: Name the speaker of the wish and the words that make it a wish.
Original criterion: Identifies Eli and I want, retaining wish status rather than reporting a completed placement or test.
Worked response: Eli says “I want”; the blue panel’s placement is a wish.
Complete unrelated next teaching
complete unrelated original ordinary teaching; not a held-source rehearsal, model student or observed result
Whole source: Original fictional lunch-menu drawing story: Hana says, “I wish the heading were beside the soup sketch.” Nobody rearranged the imaginary menu.
Child invitation: Name the wish without claiming somebody moved the heading.
Worked reasoning: Hana’s wish describes a desired layout, not a completed change.
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Keep an own wish identification with source words.
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Model the distinction between desire and recorded action in this full new menu story.
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Invite a new own sentence that names Hana and leaves the rearrangement unreported.
Observable next contribution: The own answer retains the wish and does not create a layout action.
B-later-2
Exact prompt: Quote Mo’s exact words with Mo named. If writing, show the quotation boundaries and sentence punctuation.
Original criterion: Names Mo and preserves the exact tentative words including think/might/for me; written conventions are judged only with actual written/directed evidence.
Worked response: Mo said, “I think the amber panel might be easier for me to notice.”
Complete unrelated next teaching
complete unrelated original ordinary teaching; not a held-source rehearsal, model student or observed result
Whole source: Invented comic speech: Dev says, “I think the dotted border might help me find the title.” No border trial or other reader is supplied.
Child invitation: Give Dev exact words, including the uncertainty.
Worked reasoning: Dev said, “I think the dotted border might help me find the title.” keeps think, might and me.
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Collect an own exact quotation frame before a model.
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Locate tentative words inside the quote, and the speaker label outside it; model punctuation only for the written opportunity.
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Invite own faithful quotation with the same uncertainty; record exact support and mode.
Observable next contribution: The quoted uncertainty, first-person scope and speaker remain intact.
B-later-3
Exact prompt: Report Mo’s meaning in your own words; make clear that it is a tentative personal judgement, not a test result.
Original criterion: Faithfully reports Mo’s tentative personal judgement without asserting proven ease or universal noticeability.
Worked response: Mo thought the amber panel might be easier for Mo to notice; it was not a measured result.
Complete unrelated next teaching
complete unrelated original ordinary teaching; not a held-source rehearsal, model student or observed result
Whole source: Fictional sound-guide story: Tess says, “Perhaps the short pause would help me.” No pause was trialled and no other listener is discussed.
Child invitation: Report a possibility without making a sound experiment happen.
Worked reasoning: Tess thinks a short pause may help personally; the story contains no trial result.
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Keep an own reported meaning and its uncertainty marker.
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Model replacing the direct first person with a named person while keeping perhaps/may meaning.
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Invite a different own report; do not add an audio trial or require speaking/listening to real sound.
Observable next contribution: The own report stays tentative and personal, with no invented trial.
B-later-4
Exact prompt: Link the two voices in a short reader note. Explain why these statements do not establish one best panel.
Original criterion: Own linked note keeps Eli’s wish and Mo’s tentative preference and explains that neither a comparative test nor universal best is supplied.
Worked response: Eli wants blue near the title, while Mo thinks amber might be easier personally. These voices do not show one panel is best for everyone.
Complete unrelated next teaching
complete unrelated original ordinary teaching; not a held-source rehearsal, model student or observed result
Whole source: Invented game-character conversation: Lin wants a wide cover. Noor thinks a narrow cover might fit a fictional shelf. No fit check or common winning rule is given.
Child invitation: Let a reader hear both voices without announcing a winner.
Worked reasoning: Lin’s wish and Noor’s possible shelf fit answer different questions; no supplied test establishes a best cover.
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Retain an own reader note and ask which job each voice does.
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Model while/and as links between different purposes; avoid calling different preferences false facts.
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Invite a new own linked explanation with the absent fit check kept open.
Observable next contribution: The own note preserves both voices and does not award an unsupported best-cover result.