# English evidence, keys and next moves

Keep a simple ledger for each learner: `date / prompt and exact response / source seen or heard / access and adult prompts / what this shows / next teaching move`. Whole-class chorus and partner rehearsal inform instruction but are not individual independent samples. Rotate planned focus learners; if you did not see an independent response, record **not yet observed**. These short checks cover parts of Year 5 English, not the full achievement standard.

| Day | Check | Keyed evidence and immediate response |
| ---: | --- | --- |
| 1 | Are 20 different users established? | No. `5+8+7=20` observations; a person may repeat. Reteach observation vs unique person with three token piles. |
| 2 | Why not ask only one friend? | One view cannot represent all users. Prompt learner to name who is missing, without forcing a particular answer. |
| 3 | First sentence of a paragraph | It should name the main message before details. If it starts with unexplained figures, model a reader question and revise. |
| 4 | Accurate noun group | `three ten-minute counts` is supported; `three sunny counts` invents weather. Trace every adjective to a source. |
| 5 | Independent proposal | See Check A below. |
| 6 | Is “five boxes cheaper” proved? | No price has been supplied. “It might use fewer boxes” is a bounded possibility. |
| 7 | Four boxes of nine | Equal mathematically, but the scenario says those boxes are not yet available. |
| 8 | Conditional sentence | “If four boxes become available, nine books can go in each.” A main clause and condition are both present. |
| 9 | Pitch listener summary | Listener can restate claim, fact, condition and unanswered question; pace/accent are not proxies for quality. |
| 10 | New source critique | See Check B below. |

## Day 5 check A

**Prompt:** “Write a short note to the fictional lunch-space decision group. State what the Tuesday note supports, what it cannot settle and a sensible next evidence step.” Text A stays available as the source, not a sentence to copy. The child chooses a recommendation; evidence, not agreement with a preferred option, is assessed.

**Possible strong answer, not a required script:** “We should ask more people before choosing a shade change. A recorder counted 5, 8 and 7 uses at three times on one Tuesday. The same person could have been counted again, so this does not show 20 different users or what everyone wants. We could ask users and staff about several safe options.”

**Key:** a bounded main claim; accurate detail from one Tuesday; limit that three counts may repeat and give no preference; a feasible next question/action. `20 observations` is acceptable if labelled as such. “20 different children”, “everyone”, “will solve” and unreported weather are overclaims. A learner may reasonably argue for trying a temporary option if they state it as a proposal, not a proven result.

## Day 10 check B

**Fresh fictional card; read or display exactly:** “On one Thursday, a teacher counted 6 occupied reading-corner seats at 1:00 and 9 at 1:10. The teacher did not track whether the same people stayed. A flyer says, ‘Fifteen different children always need more seats. Buy new chairs immediately.’ There are no prices or room measurements in the note.”

Ask the learner to: (1) give one verified observation; (2) underline two overclaims; (3) write or compose a 3–5 sentence note to a fictional librarian that has a claim, source fact, limit and next question; and (4) present its main point in 30–60 seconds by an agreed mode. Read-aloud means the result is source evaluation/composition, not independent decoding.

**Answer key:** 6 and 9 occupied seats at two times on one Thursday are observations; 15 is the sum of counts but **not** proven different children. “Always” is unsupported by one day; “immediately” and “buy” are recommendations unsupported by cost, room or other options. A sound response may ask about other days, unique users, safe capacity, space, price or alternatives. It need not recommend buying chairs. If a learner calls the flyer a fact because it is printed, ask them to compare the flyer to the source method.

## Four-criterion rubric for each independent check

| Criterion | Secure evidence in this task | Developing evidence | Next move |
| --- | --- | --- | --- |
| Source accuracy | Exact count/time and source method retained; no invented detail | Number named without method, or observation confused with unique people | Recreate counts with labelled time cards; ask “same people?” |
| Reasoning boundary | Names one limit and avoids `everyone/always/proves` | Says “not enough” without saying what is missing | Ask “What result would make your claim stronger?” |
| Organisation and language | Main message early; evidence, limit and next action linked; condition clear where used | Ideas present but reader cannot see relation | Move sentence cards; orally rehearse `although/if` with a complete main clause |
| Audience exchange | Can paraphrase a different view and justify a proposal respectfully | Repeats own claim without answering a question | Practise listen–paraphrase–ask with a partner; recheck privately |

Mark each `secure / developing / not yet observed`; do not average into a whole-year grade. Distinguish idea quality, English language access, independent reading, spelling, motor transcription and presentation mode. If a learner uses a home language or an interpreter, record how meaning was checked; do not pretend an unreviewed translation is assessment evidence. If a communication mode was inaccessible, change the mode and recheck the same construct.

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