Target: compare Text J drafts and create a short public caption preserving an invitation without inventing outcomes. Prepare: H, J and public editor.
- Launch · 2 min. Read J Draft 1's “Every pitch becomes an episode.” Ask for the source line that can test it.
- Model · 4 min. Place H's eight expected slots next to Draft 1. Explain why “every” conflicts with the explicit no-guarantee sentence. Draft 2 names a condition and permissions process as a plan.
- Guided reading · 5 min. Compare “finally speak for the town” with “invites short pitches.” Discuss who is positioned as previously silent, without assuming a real town's history.
- Practice route · 7 min. Learners choose Day 18 route; produce a 30–45-word caption/transcript for a fictional public page with one exact invitation, one selection limit and one permission question.
- Peer audit · 4 min. Reader checks the caption against H, then asks whether a web viewer without an image would understand it. Revise if needed.
- Exit · 3 min. “Which draft is closer to H's stated selection limit, and why?” Key: Draft 2; it retains eight planned slots and avoids an every-pitch guarantee.