V12 AltYear 2 English · T2 W11–12 · Aids / V12 alt · Text version

Title: A Guide for the Puppet Ticket — complete neutral source. Complete source: A made-up puppet show uses paper tickets only. A paper folder has a front flap. The Moon ticket is behind the Tree ticket inside. A new helper wants Moon. Open the flap, move Tree aside, then take Moon. The flap must open before moving those tickets. A title may be chosen before or after drafting. Separate sentence ideas: The flap is open. The Moon ticket is behind the Tree ticket. An unclear draft says: The Tree ticket covers the Moon ticket. Move it aside. The author's intended move is to move Tree. No real show, paid ticket or reader trial is supplied. Full illustration: The source shows an open paper-folder flap and Tree ticket in front of Moon ticket. All names/relationships also appear in text. No finished guide, selected edit or joined sentence appears. All information is supplied source meaning. No learner response or staff key is shown.