Codes: AC9E3LA04, AC9E3LA07, AC9E3LA08, AC9E3LY06. Aim: choose a precise past-tense verb and group related events in a paragraph. Bring: four event cards, sentence examples from materials.
- Notice · 3 min. Read “Mira looked” and “Mira stared”. Ask what each suggests. Return to Story A to check the stronger choice.
- Model · 5 min. Write
Mira worries.besideMira worried when she saw the blocked path.Say: “The story happened earlier, so worried locates it in the past. Saw names a different action.” Underline the verbs. - Paragraph model · 5 min. Put
saw trays / read sign / worriedin one box andasked Ms Vale / carried traysin another. Explain that the first group develops the problem; the next develops the attempt. A paragraph groups a related stage, not an arbitrary number of sentences. - Compose · 7 min. Children choose two story stages and write or dictate two short paragraphs of 1–2 connected sentences each. Offer action-verb tiles (
noticed,asked,carried,planned). Partner points to the transition and checks tense consistency. - Edit aloud · 3 min. Model changing a stray present verb in a past recount. Have learners choose one verb to improve without increasing length just for length's sake.
- Check · 2 min. Everyone revises
Jai carry the trays. Then he draws a plan.to a consistent past recount, e.g.Jai carried the trays. Then he drew a plan.Focus learners explain the change.
Access: keyboard, word tiles, speech/AAC composition or a scribe; preserve the child's wording and record which edit was prompted. Motor presentation is separate evidence.