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Day 38 · Revise a two-scene work for a viewerFoundation Drama · T1 W7–8 · Day 38 lesson

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Foundation / Drama / Term 1 / Weeks 07 08

Part of the full two-week lesson sequence. Check the pack guide and taught point before teaching.

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Target/codes: make one purposeful revision to the placement of a returning mark/action in a child-authored two-scene work; AC9ADRFD01, AC9ADRFC01 partial; AC9ADRFP01 only if actually shared. Prepare: G record, E/F aids, broad cards and optional consenting reader.

  1. Welcome · 3 min. Ask what the maker wants a viewer to notice across the two moments; no audience is assumed.
  2. Model · 4 min. Move a practice square mark from the edge to beside A in the second frame. State one possible reason: make the returning mark easier to see; do not assert that every viewer will notice it.
  3. Try together · 5 min. Child points to or directs one small revision and predicts a possible difference in reading.
  4. Child choice · 7 min. Child authors first and revised two-scene layouts. A willing teacher/peer may view one, or the child can keep it private and explain the intended clue; sharing and consent are logged only if they occur.
  5. Notice · 4 min. Record first/revised work and any actual reader response separately. If there was no audience, write AC9ADRFP01 NOT OBSERVED.
  6. Close · 2 min. Ask what clue the child would keep in a new scene source.