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Day 139 · Revise the caption for an actual readerFoundation HASS · T3 W27–28 · Day 139 lesson

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Foundation / Hass / Term 3 / Weeks 27 28

Part of the full two-week lesson sequence. Check the pack guide and taught point before teaching.

Open for this lesson: Pack guide · Sources and materials · Worked swaps · Fresh learner checks · Aids and text routes.

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Teacher copy: This page may include teaching prompts or answer keys. Answer keys in this public library can be viewed by anyone. Give learners a clean prompt, use checks as formative evidence, and change a case locally when prior access matters.

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Target/codes: Share a source-labelled fictional object account, correction and remaining question; AC9HSFS01, AC9HSFS02, AC9HSFS03, AC9HSFS04 and AC9HSFS05 partial. Ready: A–E, revision mat, blank reader card.

Child product: A complete paper mini-museum with reader-checked caption and source cards.

  1. Open · 3 min. Choose a willing private reader or adult role; no child must perform publicly.
  2. Read source · 4 min. Re-read B, C and E only, while A's picture remains visible. Ask which one can describe marks and which one reports Mira's intention.
  3. Model · 5 min. Say “The earlier drawing shows three bars and one hole. Mira says she drew the bars as her tray reminder. After the later draft and correction, other people's use remains unknown.” Keep “Mira says” in the caption.
  4. Child inquiry · 7 min. Open a pretend mini-exhibit for a willing private reader. Child arranges the drawing copy, catalogue, Mira pocket, repaired caption and question flap as one usable paper display. The reader asks “Show the source for these words.” Child tells what changed after the later draft using earlier/later/after, then revises one clause if needed; record the original and edited caption. AAC, sign, dictation or adult-directed assembly is equal.
  5. Check/respond · 4 min. Record original and edited caption. If the child treats E as permission for a real display, remind that all sources are fiction and real consent has not been sought.
  6. Exit · 2 min. File caption as a fictional practice product. Next move: tomorrow's unseen archive tests the same source boundary with new facts.